Alucard
Beta Wolf
Your Lord and Master of all that doesn't make sense.[M0n:20]
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Post by Alucard on Apr 22, 2006 5:00:13 GMT -5
i wrote this last night well i should say i took a origional poem i did kept the same idea...which is feeling betrayed, cheatedand pretty much at the end of ones rope ...and rewrote it.. i tend to revamp alot of my writing time and time again.
Twist the Knife
You scream but your words Fall upon deaf ears All of this time I’ve been spoon fed lies Throw me away I don’t feel a thing You run away in a hurry You shouldn’t worry I’ve lived a wasted life Pick it up and Twist the knife
Second by second I count the time Minute by minute I continue to die It’s my plea Set me free Harvest my soul Then throw me in a hole Cut the stitch And scratch my itch Watch it bleed and hear me yell Welcome to my personal hell If this is life Don’t worry just twist the knife
Born into life Born into death Live long enough to draw your first breath Go to sleep to dream a dream You’ll never wake up to let loose your first scream Trapped in a nightmare that’s spinning out of control Forget me and my heart that you stole Push it in further so that I know you care Hold my gaze as death settles in to my stare Let me turn my back so it’s easier for you You can begin your life anew With the flick of your wrist and a end in sight Free me from life With a Twist of your knife.
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Post by dragornis on Apr 24, 2006 7:27:13 GMT -5
i wrote this last night well i should say i took a origional poem i did kept the same idea...which is feeling betrayed, cheatedand pretty much at the end of ones rope ...and rewrote it.. i tend to revamp alot of my writing time and time again. Twist the KnifeMore detris of love lost, no greater pain for there is no anesthetic for the broken hearted.. -+-Win32##Mozilla Firefox 1.5.0.2##1152 × 864##1-+-
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rendclaw
Lone Wolf
[M0:7]Most common observation about me: "Sumtin not right wi' dat boay!"
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Post by rendclaw on Oct 25, 2006 14:54:18 GMT -5
i wrote this last night well i should say i took a origional poem i did kept the same idea...which is feeling betrayed, cheatedand pretty much at the end of ones rope ...and rewrote it.. i tend to revamp alot of my writing time and time again. Twist the KnifeMore detris of love lost, no greater pain for there is no anesthetic for the broken hearted.. -+-Win32##Mozilla Firefox 1.5.0.2##1152 × 864##1-+- That may be right, that's why it's good to have friends. Let me introduce you to Jack, Jim, and Jose, they're good friends of mine!
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